Wrong On So Many Layers

1 – It’s a simile not a metaphor
2 – It’s a faulty metaphor (simile..whatev’s). WWII did not attack Pearl Harbor, whoever said it did. And WWII did not un-attack Hiroshima and Nagasaki. you’re like an entire war? Which does things all by itself?
3 – You are willing right now huh? New frontier in sweaty palmed happy place imaginings for you tonight huh? PS I let the Japanese Defense Force (and your local psych unit) know about your threats potential.
4 – You really need to establish how the exchange between you and the “Hogeists” is like WWII before launching a whopper like this one.
5 – Every last one of the “Hogeists” huh?
6 – And you know this because of …? got some secret mind reading powers we don’t know about? (I know, I know, all libs do, seen it a thousand times)
7 – Seriously, no one un-deranged talks or writes like this. GS-13 Writer/Editor riiight youbetcha champ.

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3 Responses to “Wrong On So Many Layers”

  1. ratt22 Says:

    The Cabin boy couldn’t fight his way out of a paper bag!

  2. Paul Lemmen Says:

    Reblogged this on Dead Citizen's Rights Society.

  3. Michael Says:

    I missed this tweet. Thanks for sharing. And yea, who writes like that?

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